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From above the stairs

**Before:** A 45-year-old woman with brown hair and rosacea—redness

A goofy black dog with big eyes slurping ramen from a huge bowl

“Join us for a spring picnic with kebabs to celebrate a special woman’s birthday!” (15 words) Alternative (more formal): “Celebrate a woman’s birthday at our spring picnic featuring delicious kebabs!” (12 words) Choose based on tone preference

“Spider-Man snaps a selfie with adorable Japanese maids at a cozy café.” (12 words) *Rewritten to be concise while keeping the playful tone and key elements: superhero

“Spider-Man snaps a selfie with adorable Japanese maids at a cozy cafe.” (16 words) *Kept it concise while preserving the playful